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Desert Highway by ~Echoeslegend:iconEchoeslegend:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open




Butterfly, cross the highway.
Thin-slit wings gilded with exhaust.
Leading

the cowgirl:
Oil and leathered boots,
sweat behind her ears.
Mirages don’t melt,
don’t drip to the blacktop.

Eyes like a gunshot,
or a backfiring engine,
or 120 mph
without a seatbelt.
©2005-2008 ~Echoeslegend
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Submitted: November 17, 2005
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Images..

critique the hell out of it.

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~harold-of-the-rocks:iconharold-of-the-rocks: Nov 17, 2005, 3:50:29 PM
this is a really exciting poem. "images" indeed...very visual. good work
~Echoeslegend:iconEchoeslegend: Nov 18, 2005, 5:46:45 PM
Thank you. :D

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-Ravie

It appears my hypocrisy knows no bounds.
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